Short note on pleonasm, and easy exercise to check understanding.
Learn something new about prose in a short time
"The door creaks open. It's hinges wail...
Victor Verdun is fifty years old. He sits at his desk, thinking and despondent.
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For my brother
My 2nd Attempt At this Challenging Stylistic Exercise. Please, do tell me how I did this time around!